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Cover art for ~BronyFable's Last Night a DJ Saved My Life

This is all your fault. I hate drawing rain. And foreshortening.

This image is only to be used by ~BronyFable (and why would you want this anyway?)

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:iconbronyfable:
I'm rating this 5/5 whether you like it or not! This artwork you did for me is pure beauty, its like L.S.D. I can't get enough of it. The rain effect you used here is beautiful, and along with the faint neon hues it really shows off the mood. Glum and monotone, with a dash of hope. Vinyl stands out so well, her features look so sharp and refined, yet the still keep the feel of the image. Her mane and tail look very stunning, and I'm glad you kept this design. Vinyl's eyes are the shade I was going for, soft scarlet. Her ears are so cute and fluffy! I just want to give her a massive hug right now! *Squee* Oh, and her horn is nice and pointy, giving the flow a nice bit of upheaval. The train is nice, it doesn't stand out like an eyesore, but it's not too shallow either. The rain bounces off the top carriage nicely and gives the picture more depth. The spires in the background are exactly what I wanted them to be, and really give off the corporate feel I was wanting. The sun shines faintly above all the destruction, all the death and all the sadness. A sign of better things to come.

~Edward
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:icon1jet10:
the perspective is off but i can tell that is intentional. it actually adds to the piece by making the viewer feel disoriented.
Colors are everything in this one.
the buildings are an aura in my opinion, they loose all connections with the cement as you look higher. it's stunning really.
there is a little bit of an issue with where the shadows should go, mainly under her left front leg. i might be wrong but i feel that shadow should be on the other side because of the glow from the train.
keep it up
i give it a 5
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:iconknexfan100:
knexfan100 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
so fuggin cute. i love this
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:iconeliseo97:
eliseo97 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't handle the feels any longer 
T_T
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! I should totally draw more emotional stuff. My gallery is seriously lacking in that.
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:icon1jet10:
1jet10 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i still look at this sometimes
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh, thank you! It's still pretty good.
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:iconsoul-like-jade:
Soul-Like-Jade Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013
Can I use this in a vid im making about DJ Pon 3?
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Sure thing! Credit would be nice, but not completely necessary if there will be tons of other images involved.
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:iconlianka2o:
Lianka2o Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Filmographer
Very cute :3😱😋
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much!!
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:iconpunkstar49:
PunkStar49 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awesome
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much~!
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:iconpunkstar49:
PunkStar49 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Your welcome
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:icondjentlewolf:
djentlewolf Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
Mind if I use this for this song [link] when I finish it?
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You'll have to ask the person I originally drew this for. As long as you get his permission, then go ahead!
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:iconmarblemagic:
Marblemagic Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
what the hell man? the rain is amazing!
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! Guess it's not that bad after all.
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:iconmarblemagic:
Marblemagic Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Are you kidding? I can picture it perfectly... is there like a story to thiz?
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yep, this is the cover art of a fanfic. Link in description.
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:iconkartaltheartist:
KartalTheArtist Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like your ears.
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! Ears are fun to draw~
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alexanderhunt88 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Been reading the fic.

It's weird, confusing, and strange; but at the same time unique, different and engaging.

It's very polarizing, to say the least.
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm still partway through reading Chapter 3.

And I can tell you from experience that the author of said fic is weird, confusing, and strange as well.

Glad you gave it a shot!
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alexanderhunt88 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I started reading it because it looked interesting. It is.
(The artwork certainly helped)*wink*
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HotaruWaffle101 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ermahgerd, so nice ^o^
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much~!
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:icondzikatamara:
DzikaTamara Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
C' mon let's run, just you and I .... <33
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:iconhadeswolf:
HadesWolf Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student
The style maintains the cute style of the show while at the same time it has that original touch that makes it look really different, this is great.
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much!
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:iconomfgpainkillers:
omfgpainkillers Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student General Artist
I LOVE IT WAAAY TOO MUCH MAN
I..
I'M GONNA DIE D:
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
I'm sorry :c You'll be missed.
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:iconomfgpainkillers:
omfgpainkillers Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
I saw it again today on tumblr..
IM DIEING AGAIN!!!
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Whose tumblr? I know it's on at least 2.
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:iconomfgpainkillers:
omfgpainkillers Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Theponyartcollection
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! Guess that makes it the 3rd tumblr then.
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:iconfiskefyren:
fiskefyren Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
"Come with me if you want to live."
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:iconsensitsu:
Sensitsu Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is amazing! I love it~
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconzerozi:
ZeroZi Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
awesome
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconzerozi:
ZeroZi Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
np
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:iconbioshock140:
Bioshock140 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
This is real nice.
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:iconbioshock140:
Bioshock140 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
You're welcome.
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:iconni-xi:
NI-XI Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is so pretty :)
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconyoshiart24:
YoshiArt24 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Vinyl: please get up!!
Me(Crimson ponysona OC): *is unconscious*
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:icongshgunner:
GSHgunner Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Vinyl: Please get up.

Me: no! rolling in puddles is fun! XD
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:iconsyntactics:
Syntactics Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Totally what I was thinking when I drew this. ^^
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:icongshgunner:
GSHgunner Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
lol really? I somehow came up with the idea just by looking at it and going by the perspective of the one on the floor, thinking what could he be doing on the floor in the rain... rolling in puddles like I did when I was young XD
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:iconbronyfable:
BronyFable Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Professional Writer
You know, I wanted to put that in the fiction... But it would have killed the whole feeling, so I left it out. There is the part when she slaps him though..

~Edward
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